Hi,

I’m writing a new novel and looking for someone who would like to offer some critiques.

The theme is Romance.

the main characters: Carla Hunter, a young woman with a photographic memory and a 5-year-old daughter.

Jay Williams: a VP at a large downtown Houston bank, and a 5-year-old nephew adopted after the death of his brother and family in a car crash.

Carla has left several jobs in the past due to sexual harassment. When she interviews for a position at a new bank she encounters a man who she met the previous night and had a dispute with him over her car.

Jay is known as the ‘closer’ at his bank. They call him in to ‘finalize’ difficult deals which others have been unable to get signed.

The two have an instant connection, but the CEO at her prior job is determined to make her have a relationship with him, though she detests him for fondling her breasts. She was so humiliated that she

reported him to H/R and gave her resignation. He pursues her with phone calls and emails.

What storyline would you think might be good to pursue.

A free draft copy of the story will be sent to any interested person.

just leave a note on my site with your name and email address.

thanks for your time.

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